Have a read of this fabulous Minotaur character description by Haadiya. Look how well she is using her commas to separate clauses in her sentences!
Sep 302014
Sep 302014
But as I looked around the school everyone was completely gone! I walked to the hall, but the mass was not on. I was bewildered. It was then I remembered they are in church.”I’m missing it!” I yelled! But as I yelled I smashed the trophy and my cheeks turned red and I screeched. Then I heard laughter coming from outside. They were coming back!!! I hid under one of the tables in Y5s classroom (even though I am in Y2) Bang!… The Y5 door slammed open and the teacher saw my feet and sent me home.
Sep 302014
My favorite book is called Frozen
My favorite character in Frozen is Elsa.I like Elsa because she is a very unique Disney princess don`t you agree with me. Frozen is my favorite book because it is a different to any other book.
Sep 302014
Today is November, the 5th and that’s bonfire night COOL. Now where in my car but just as I looked around…we were already pulling up in my granddad Stillings drive “look at those beautiful flowers” I mumbled while I was walking in we had pork pie with mushy peas Yum. BOOM the fireworks flew up in the midnight sky there were pink, blue, orange, green, red, yellow, purple, white/silver, navy blue, gold, maroon, balky brown, lilac, turquoise and any other colours you could think of.
Sep 302014
….As I looked around I saw a mysterious jungle it was a bit creepy there were tigers ,bees, lions and hairy smelly monkeys . Also I found some dinner on the floor so I ate it because I was very hungry but all the animals screeched at me so I screamed and I ran away into this village. I ran to my own village and I sore my grandma and mum. then i had my tea at home because i ran a bit to much then i went to bed and I gave my mum a big cuddle,KISS good night THE END
Sep 302014
My favourite book is the dairy of the wimpy kid…I love this story because Greg the main character has lots of fun in the book, like when he went on the cranium shaker with his friend Rowley. Even when he went to summer camp with Rowley it was the best fun he had in the book . Also there was a girl called Holly who he had a crush on her.
I would reccommend this book as it is a great adventure, it gets your mind going and makes you want to read the rest of the series.
Sep 292014
Today in literacy we wrote character descriptions of the Minotaur from Percy Jackson and the Lightening Thief, the novel we have been reading in class. There were some excellent pieces of writing and I will post some examples tomorrow!
Miss Speake
Sep 272014
Here is an example of a setting description by Ruby which really impressed me. What do you like about it? Is there any other way it could be improved?
Sep 272014
Great news Year 4! Our blog is officially being viewed in other countries! We have had visitors from the USA, Ireland and even Australia! I had to reset the globe so you wont be able to see on there yet, but take a look at some of your 100 word challenges to see who might have commented! They also give you some really helpful comments about your writing! 🙂
Miss Speake
Sep 242014
Today is school trip day just for me, miss Speake, Ruby and Amber I’ve got to go bye…. Righty then here I am on the coach going to the museum with Ruby and Amber at each side of me and guess what were almost there AWESOME. Oh my gosh I cant breath it’s [sigh] we have to go in now. ”wow look at that crocodile ”But as soon as I ”Hello ladies I’m pepper the orange crocodile and my scales are very soft I also forgot what I just said but as soon as the crocodile …..