Sep 242014
One day lots of children called David, Josh, Kyle, Kate Melisa and Molly all went to go and call for Olivia happily. When they nocked Olivia suddenly opened the door while she was reading a book about crocodiles. Then we asked if she’s coming outside she said no because she’s going to see her granddad with the soft teddys in his room. Despite the fact I’m going I totally forgot to tell you. Also his house in whack felled street smells like peppers however he has this orange gold statue in his living room aswell as a blue couch.
Hi! Thanks for participating in the 100 WC this week! I like how you personalized your piece by using names of characters. In the future, before posting your piece I would recommend that you read your piece to make sure it flows nicely. Also, please edit and use punctuation. Have a great week and keep on writing!
Mrs. Ray in Illinois; USA
100WC Team