Oct 212014
One sunny day there lived 3 girls called Anya Charlee and Olivia . Today was halloween.Anya dressed up as a vampire Charlee dressed up as a dead school girl. Also Olivia went as a witch she looked really good. When they set of they said to each over lets go frow that forest because they could see a creepy old house.They all said yes lets go when they got near the house there was a statue standing near the huge tree.Then when they left there was a voice that said come back children come nock on the door for some candy dont be frightened im just a statue when they turned around the statue was gone
I think you need some commas.
Hi Aaliyah, this was an interesting response to your prompt. I really liked the way you ended with a bit of mystery. Just remember to check your spelling and take a look to see if you can use any other punctuation? Keep writing, I will look forward to reading more of your work.