Dec 102014
Suddenly, a door opened and strange elves came running out with Santa. Santa was wearing a jolly big, blood red suit with white fluff around his waist under his thick, shiny, pich-black belt. The elves were wearing a green waiscoat also white and red legins. They had pointy black shoes on there small feet. They were looking very nervous because they were doing a celebration for Santas 2nd year delivering toys to chlidren, adults, grandmas and grandads. So then Father Christmas delivered the presents.
I love your colour descriptions, “blood red” and “pitch black”, can you think of one for the green? A lot of good descriptive words here, well done.
I liked it when you said the elvs ran out
Why did you like this though?