invasion of the 3 eyed aliens

 Posted by on January 23, 2015  News  Add comments
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It was Saturday morning when I woke up to a squeaking coming from down stairs.
What could it be i thought to myself as i slowly climbed out of my bed.
Could it be my pet hamster playing i crept down the stairs.
ARGHHHHH! there in front of me was the ugliest looking alien he had three eyes.
Then he touched me on the head “What was that i could feel?” i was floating in the air like a bubble.
Then suddenly i dropped closing my eyes when i opened them i was in bed it was all a dream.

  One Response to “invasion of the 3 eyed aliens”

  1. Well done Nicholas! This was a really exciting story with a great problem! I have highlighted in bold the parts that I really liked.
    Next time remember capital letter and full stops – think about where a new sentence is starting!
    Keep up the good writing!

    Miss Speake

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