Sep 242014
On one stormy night 2 crocodiles went looking for some mangos and they bumped into each over and they fell in love. They both like mangos and they were both very soft .When they got home there house was trashed. They were very angry and they went to go find who did it. They split up and they went to find him or her. They lost each over and when they finally found each other they had forgot each other. They found out there was pepper in the jungle and their favourite colour was orange and they were really soft . Then they remembered each over.
Interesting story. I know that it was difficult this week with the random words, but I would try to work them all to work in the story. It seemed like some of them were random and didn’t fit. I also would have loved to know why they forgot each other. I think you could have said that the pepper helped them to remember. Keep up the hard work!