….As I looked around I saw a mysterious jungle it was a bit creepy there were tigers ,bees, lions and hairy smelly monkeys . Also I found some dinner on the floor so I ate it because I was very hungry but all the animals screeched at me so I screamed and I ran away into this village. I ran to my own village and I sore my grandma and mum. then i had my tea at home because i ran a bit to much then i went to bed and I gave my mum a big cuddle,KISS good night THE END
My favourite book is the dairy of the wimpy kid…I love this story because Greg the main character has lots of fun in the book, like when he went on the cranium shaker with his friend Rowley. Even when he went to summer camp with Rowley it was the best fun he had in the book . Also there was a girl called Holly who he had a crush on her.
I would reccommend this book as it is a great adventure, it gets your mind going and makes you want to read the rest of the series.
Today in literacy we wrote character descriptions of the Minotaur from Percy Jackson and the Lightening Thief, the novel we have been reading in class. There were some excellent pieces of writing and I will post some examples tomorrow!
Miss Speake
Here is an example of a setting description by Ruby which really impressed me. What do you like about it? Is there any other way it could be improved?
Great news Year 4! Our blog is officially being viewed in other countries! We have had visitors from the USA, Ireland and even Australia! I had to reset the globe so you wont be able to see on there yet, but take a look at some of your 100 word challenges to see who might have commented! They also give you some really helpful comments about your writing! 🙂
Miss Speake
Today is school trip day just for me, miss Speake, Ruby and Amber I’ve got to go bye…. Righty then here I am on the coach going to the museum with Ruby and Amber at each side of me and guess what were almost there AWESOME. Oh my gosh I cant breath it’s [sigh] we have to go in now. ”wow look at that crocodile ”But as soon as I ”Hello ladies I’m pepper the orange crocodile and my scales are very soft I also forgot what I just said but as soon as the crocodile …..
Suddenly a bunch of old elves came walking through the woods. one of the elves was called bobby another was called Ellie. Then they came across a big orange crocodile it was eating a big pile of peppers . then they sat down to have a picnic they pulled out a soft blanket and they forgot to pack a big orange pepper . After they started to walk home and get the orange pepper bobby shouted we for got the orange pepper . So he went to get it and they started walking back to the woods very happy .
Once this man eating crocodile who loved pepper he lived in this Island called dead Island. ”that is freaky” said jack. What about you Nathan what do you think about the crocodile ”I KNOW the crocodile went to this guy he was holding pepper for some reason the crocodile bit his hand off blood was every were ” Nathan said.” bed time ” mum said. the next day we went out on the beach we saw a crocodile I ran into the shop.
A long time ago there was a little crocodile who lived in a massive jungle . This crocodile was called Pepper. She had an orange teddy which was very soft. One day Pepper saw another crocodile called Madison. Pepper said ”hello” but Madison didn’t answer so Pepper tried again but this time she said ”I am Pepper what is your name” Madison still didn’t answer so Pepper walked off .
one day there lived a soft orange crocodile called pepper. And there lived a boy who lived in Italy called forgot .then one day the lovely boy called forgot went out to play but then he saw a orange crocodile, he was laying sun bathing . first he thought he was a human but when he went a little more further he saw a crocodile was playing football he won two one then I thought have In seen a crocodile no I never seen a crocodile I only saw them in books then I talked to him then we went home.