The ship was brown like a tree trunk. It was huge. On the top was a gigantic pole, and on the pole were two arrows pointing towards East and West. On the left and right were two bendy, dark brown poles. Also on them were stretchy elastic bands, holding them high. The pole that had the East and West looked like a cross. At the very top was a huge can. It looked a bit like a dustbin. The ship was enormous. Also, the windows were little gaps with missing pieces of wood. It looked a bit black as well.
One scorching summers day Ruby and Amber were playing outside before tea. Ruby had soft, silky, golden blonde hair and Amber also had soft ,silky, blonde hair. Suddenly their mum called them in for tea. The twins had sausage mash and beans. They said to their parents mischievously “can we play out a bit longer before we go to bed pretty please?” So they crept out side and played out . A hideous creature appeared and stole them. As the leaves rustled the creature stomped across the forest and threw them into a metal cage .
They cant remember the rest….
Here in the UK we definitely have a late autumn with golden coloured leaves finally falling from the trees. They are making wonderful carpets for us to walk on or ‘scuff’ along in! I am using this for your writing this week. Please make sure you use the prompt as it is written. The prompt this week is:
…but as the leaves rustled…
Some of you have only been writing a few short sentences. Do try to make sure that you use all 100 words.
The form will close on Saturday 29th November.
In November we remember who have died in the war. We can show that we care by praying for them. We know that people can die today and we pray on that Sunday for those who have died. The war started in 1914 in November 11th. We need to remember this day of November . The people need to fight throw all the dangerous things. Poppies sell out to remember the people who have died. Also we remember the people in your sweet and loving family.
Do you know about D Day? If not then this will help you remember the lives off the people who went to war.It is very sad when you hear about the war because some body you know might have gone to war and got killed by being shot or being right next to a grenade that set of. For someone to die in war that is in your family is sad because you loved them with all your heart and soul. Just imagine if you were a solider and you got shot and you died, all your family would feel sad to lose you.
November November Remember Remember the use of poppies,the people who died in war remember the time before when everyone was happy for the their family members. But what they didn’t know was war and then some more including the first and second world war. Remember Remember the eleventh of November. If you’re in the UK you may have seen the poppy display near the Tower of London. You hear about the war in History and it is true. You see it all started in 1914. Remember Remember the eleventh of November. The end of this song is very clear so just remember your poppies this year.
One day a bear called Dream Bear was sending brilliant dreams to everyone. When she gave it to Wonderheart Bear she had a really exciting dream. Because she didn’t have a belly badge she had a dream that a purple badger was stuck in a hole and Wonderheart Bear ran speedily and sent her belly badge to the badger and took it out. Her belly badge was a sparkley red love heart.But then the Plain Bow came and attacked their dreams to make them awful dreams. However then all of the bears sang a song and their dreams became better.
Today is Children in Need Day and to raise money, Year 4 have paid a pound to bring in their own toys to play with. They are having a lot of fun and it is great to see the children all playing such a variety of games together, such as ‘Fishing Game’, ‘Pop to the Shops’ and ‘Kerplunk’!
Here are some pictures of our day:
Just look at how hard Year 4 were working today! This photograph was taken during maths, while we were doing some work on perimeter.
Later in the day in literacy, we discussed what makes headlines effective in newspaper reports. What different techniques of writing can we use?
What type of technique does the writing below use? How do you know?