The prompt this week is still keeping with the senses. It is:
…I could not believe the smell…
Do make sure you check your pieces before posting. Sometimes they need a bit of a tweak. Reading them out loud often helps to see where you need to make changes.
One cold winters day Madison was playing on her computer wile her mum was washing up. Madison was 9 years old and her mum was thirty years old they lived on they were own. One day Madison asked if she could play out side with friends, Massey and iChat . She said “off course not it is too dark”. Madison ran up stairs and shut her door. suddenly a wizard came and said “I am gowing to cast a spell on you I am going to make you blind “. Madison screamed she ran down stairs and went to her mum and said im blind . her mum was a witch so then suddenly I was able to see again. Too be continued …
0ne day playing in the colossal park with my best friends Aiden, Alfie ,Sayed and Nicholas. strait after the park we tip-toad down the creepy diminutive valley. Suddenly I notest an inormas castle. cautiously I walked down the swirly dark path. so I trembled into the pich black door I ran into the kitchen there was a old fation black and wite floor. And scelingntons hanging from the red roof it was as red as blood. then I zoomed up stairs like a roket thet was creeking . I saw a creepy foot hoping and I started screaming I heard bats scweeling and then we lived happly ever after.
As I looked around I could see a clossle jungle it was very quite there . I walked down and I could see a gigantic apple it was very juicy I jumped over and I could see a scaly green crocodile I went to have a close a look it didn’t move I was parlized to death it slaped me and hurted me so I told it not to and it stoped and said sorry and we were friends forever and we played together I hugged him.
… As i looked arownd …i notest a palese sprklys in a pink candy world.They were gummy bares that was garding the palese and the princess.
when i wanted to go in the gummy bares said all together WHAT IS YOUR NAME!!!!!!!! my name is Amy we like that name you can go in.
So i went in she said do you want a cup of tea no i need to be going.
As I looked around the haunted house I was terrified. There was me Aiden and Jack. Olivia and Aaliyah searched the kitchen,jack and Aiden searched the living room so that meant that I had to go upstairs by my self. I didn’t have any one beside me and I could feel a breath of some one so I called Jack,Aiden,Aaliyah and Olivia. They ran upstairs as fast as a bulit and Aiden said” are you all right” and as soon as we left there was a clown in the window called It.” I will be back Charlee,” he said angrily.
Today as I looked around… I could see a, I think it was like a castle thing in the distance with like four castles all attached onto one big huge castle . As I tried to go in it wouldn’t let me in but suddenly the door sprigged open and I face planted the floor suddenly I ran up the stairs all I could see were skeletons ( But these weren’t real skeletons instead of having nothing they had bows and arrows attached to them … BOOM… the castle blow up on me, little and big pieces on me I thought I broke myself …
Suddenly as I looked around I saw a humongous castle.slowly I walked down the misty path and my hart was so fast I cadent breathe. slowly I stopped I felt like a lion was creeping behind me. Just then I knocked on the door it opened .so I went in and I saw skeletons hanging of the roof and had goo all over, it was disgusting. Quietly I walked up stairs and saw a see though ghost and I tried to go though but it wont so I tried again but I got knocked out. I cant remember the rest … it was cold it was scary.
one day there was a girl and her mum. They both notice a big zoo with lots of lion’s they looked friendly but my mum wold not take
a risk. She said don’t go near them they might bite your hand off. But she did not listen she went Nair the lion’s and tigers but they didn’t do nothing. So they sat with the lion’s and the tiger’s then we got told off by the zoo keeper .Then we was band from the zoo for life so we went home and had a cup of tea and biscuits.
…As I looked around… …BOOM!… a colossal rocket flew into the air speedily and exploded …BOOM!… and all of the parts fell to the ground. I was stuck in my house because my mum locked me in because she’s horrible. Suddenly my mum unlocked the door and she shouted “what was that terrible horrible noise.” I replied “it was a rocket” “A ROCKET!” she bellowed as her ugly teeth bit down on her lip. “Mum I think you need some medicine.” “Ok” she replied she ate the medicine. She grew so big that she fell over.