Year5LearningHive

0ne day playing in the colossal park with my best friends Aiden, Alfie ,Sayed and Nicholas. strait after the park we tip-toad down the creepy diminutive valley. Suddenly I notest  an inormas castle. cautiously I walked down the swirly dark path. so I trembled into the pich black door I ran into the kitchen there was a old fation black and wite floor. And scelingntons hanging from the red roof it was as red as blood. then I zoomed up stairs like a roket thet was creeking . I saw a creepy foot hoping and I started screaming I heard bats scweeling and then we lived happly ever after.

One day a monster was eating tea and he didn’t know were his mum and dad were so he went up stairs and checked the kitchen finally he looked in there bedroom . They  wasn’t there but suddenly there was a soft crocodile eating some fruit which was a pear orange and a pepper. He was terrified it chased him all over the house but he was faster than the colossal crocodile. So I hid before he can catch me and I hide in a cubard it was pitch black I herd a door slam he was gone my parents were there.