Oct 212014
Monday is today and that means I get to go to the museum YAY. Anyway there`s just been a new statue that has been built only days ago, I can`t wait to see it. ” I can not believe I`m here it`s so beautiful! ” Then out of the corner of my eye I saw the statue that had just been built. It looked much more scarier than I thought (baring in mind that it is Halloween ) I stepped towards the baleful statue and to my amazement he had no face at all.
I liked that you used expression.
I liked that you used CL and FS.
I liked that you used adjectives.
W:that you used some connectives.