Sep 242014
One scorching sunny day , I was bursting with excitement about the drawing competition. When I got to school I started drawing a crocodile. Next to it I drew a tall , pretty palm tree. Speedily I grabbed a handful of paints and a soft paint brush and I coloured the palm tree green and orange and the crocodile ,green. At the end the winner was announced and it was…PEPPER!!! Reluctantly I walked home whilst watching Pepper show her mum the shiny, gold trophy. The next day Pepper said to me,”Amber you can have the trophy”.So I silently walked into school happily.
Ruby, such a nice story with a happy ending that demonstrated kindness & sharing. I’m not too sure if the last sentence worded correctly but overall, a good use of your assigned words. Keep up the good work with the Team 100 wc challenge.
Ruby I absolutly love your work I’m with Joyce.