Oct 172014
One scorching summer day we went out side and had a water fight how ever if you get shot ten times you are out . Me, Alfie, jack and Nathan went to lazer zone we were blue team we won Alfie said “YES” .Then we had another round of lazer zone instead we was red we won the match again. ”WE WON AGAIN” Nathan said. ”we won again” I said we went out side I couldn’t believe the smell it smelt like rotten eggs ”DRAGONS” I said we ran back into lazer zone and hid. .
I really like you’r story Aiden
I think it is good