Nov 262014
One scorching summers day Ruby and Amber were playing outside before tea. Ruby had soft, silky, golden blonde hair and Amber also had soft ,silky, blonde hair. Suddenly their mum called them in for tea. The twins had sausage mash and beans. They said to their parents mischievously “can we play out a bit longer before we go to bed pretty please?” So they crept out side and played out . A hideous creature appeared and stole them. As the leaves rustled the creature stomped across the forest and threw them into a metal cage .
They cant remember the rest….
I like your opener :):):)