Dec 052014
Ship, ship, what a tip, old and rusty, cold and dusty.
Pirates used to climb aboard, yo ho they’d shout and go abroad. That happened in the olden days, but now we all have different ways. The scurvy pirates could dance and sing, they didn’t need a wealthy king.
Now the ship lays on the rocks, Oh I wish I could turn back the clocks. Brave people explore the ship, even though there’s a chance they could slip.
Listen listen, heres a tip, it really is a haunted ghost ship! Beware beware, and please take care. Please promise me that you’ll never go there!
I really like how you wrote this as a poem instead of just a story. I like how you had a repetitive pattern and taught a lesson at the end of the poem.
Keep up the hard work.
Ms. Ferri
100 WC Team
I think that your poem is really good. I also think that it is excellent. WELL DONE RUBY.
wow ruby that was amazing, and also I think that you should start doing just a normal story instead of a poem because you do a poem in all of the 100 word challenges otherwise this story is soo amazing
what an amazing poem I love it 🙂