The Screamer

 Posted by on October 21, 2014  News  Add comments
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Have you ever seen a statue move?     Well I sure have!

As I was thinking of a name for it, I could just about see it move and I know you guys think its not a big deal but trust me it is, it was as if he was trying to get into a position to attack me. I didn’t like it here, it was because the statue was right in the middle of these baleful woods. Due to the fact that I had visited him loads I just got so attached to him but I got the worse day of my life for the rest of my life. He was just so terrifying to be around.

  3 Responses to “The Screamer”

  1. well done Olivia 🙂

  2. Brill Liv it is very good and baleful. I love it. Well done.

  3. This is an interesting piece of writing. Try to cut down on words that aren’t really necessary – so that the words you do use are the best ones. A moving statue is an unusual idea.

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