The Haunted Sculpture

 Posted by on October 21, 2014  News  Add comments
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One stormy night I went for a walk. I went in the woods and I saw a black sculptor. It was as black as the night sky I was terefid to see the sculptor move its arms crossed to straight. I ran backwards . It started  to follow me so I ran faster! By the time I got home I turned around and it had gone. I ran back, and it was back at the sign and the same tree.I was really scared.
HOW DID HE GET THERE!!!!!!!!!

  One Response to “The Haunted Sculpture”

  1. What a great piece of work you opening sentence really captures the readers attention! You have also used a simile- as black as the night sky- which really helps the reader to imagine what it is like.

    Just have a little look, you need a comma on the third line down between me and so this is because the word ‘so’ is a conjunction which means it is connecting two sentences together.

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