I could not believe that smell of my brothers feet. His feet are disgusting. I hate the smell. I said im gowing out my eyes were waltering. My frend said can I have a go on your bike? No so you donot want a go on my new new fliker. ooooooo yess I do. We went all arownd the grove then I went in and the smell has gone. I said have you changed your socks? Yes because I knewthey stunk when I smelt them.
One day I was at my best friend Olivias house . We had some tea I could not believe the smell it was delicious. I said “what are you cooking?”. Olivias mum replied” I am cooking a sunday diner sweetheart”.After that me and Olivia played in her garden then me,olivia and Joshua Olivias little brother played tig and hide and seek. It was THE BEST DAY EVER.Also we played pool Olivia said “(5,3)I am beating you” so I said”were both on the same team were playing against Emma and Ellie.”After that we went to go up stairs and by the way we won.
The queen of hearts is richly dressed in a gown and she wears lots of make up with bold colours and a white as snow body. The queen wears a sharp as a knife crown which is sat on her ruby red hair and large extravagant rings on her fingers. The queen of hearts is very small like a child.The queen of hearts is rich, mean and feisty as well as been bossy and cruel to animals. I think the queen feels happy because she has everything she wants, but also overprotected because she has lots of knights to protect her.
one day I was supposed to be a sleep but I wasn’t because I could not believe the smell because I smelt burning fire . So I went down stairs to find out what was going on and I found out that my mum had died so I was left the house with my grouchy dad. He was grouchy because my mum had died. my dad said I have to go to summer camp but I said no because I didn’t know what to do. my dad said yes so he took me then someone told me what you have to do.At the end of the summer holidays my dad picked me up.
The queen of hearts has a snorting pink pig like the colour. She has a ruby hart dress and a golden crown. The queen of harts has a shiny lever jacket and a huge head bigger then her body. Her huge red fluffy hair that shins so bright that if you look at her you will go blind and death. This treble lady has red hart lipstick and a blue dark eye shadow that gleams like the sun. She has a shiny little Patten . It has zig zag, pattern that gleams and sparkles and shimmers like gold . she might bee thinking that she wants to cut all of the heads of In wonderland.
My favourite book is the lion the witch and the wardrobe because I love adventures and it has lots of weird things like Mr Tumness.
The mad hatter is from Alice and wonderland, his character is weired and he looks like he is going to a fancy dress party to the queen of hearts house .his clothes look rich with all his jewels ,lace and silk on his hat . also his hat is very big and he dresses not normal his hair is orange and glows like a fire also big and wild face is as white as a ghost he has eye shadow on which is very scarey and his hand bag is multi coloured i think he has a rabbit called peter and he is magic the mad hatter also had a tea party
Exciting news!
I have been in contact with a teacher from another school called St Matthews and we have decided to link our blogs, meaning you can comment on their class blog and they can comment on ours!
Here is a link to their class blog, have a look at some of their writing and what they have been doing on class, and comment like you do on our class blog! Remember to be very polite and give positive feedback! I hope you enjoy looking at another class blog!
The prompt this week is still keeping with the senses. It is:
…I could not believe the smell…
Do make sure you check your pieces before posting. Sometimes they need a bit of a tweak. Reading them out loud often helps to see where you need to make changes.
Hi Year 4, here is some homework for this week! Don’t worry, I will tell everyone on Monday as I know not everyone can access the blog at home!
As we have been practicing descriptions of characters from fantasy world I would like you to describe a character from Alice in Wonderland, a fantastic story where Alice falls down a rabbit hole into a fantasy land!
You can choose from either the Mad Hatter or the Queen of Hearts. If you want to do both that is ok but I would rather you focus on one. Use the pictures as a prompt. Remember to think about:
– what they look like (clothes, body, face)
– what kind of personality might they have
– how they might be feeling or what they could be thinking
Remember lots of detail (adjectives, verbs, adverbs, adverbs, similes, etc) and punctuation in the right places!
