Anya’s 100 word challenge

 Posted by on October 11, 2014  News  4 Responses »
Oct 112014
 

Suddenly I was able to see again… when I was blind I imagined a world full of colour. Bright lights, beautiful flowers and colourful rainbows. With no sight my world was dark and lonely.

I was excited on the day of the operation. When I woke up I could see some light shining. Three days passed and my eye sight got better. I could finally see my friends and family. Their beautiful eyes, hair and smiles finally made me feel part of a family. My first adventure was going to a funfair. I enjoyed every minute. I can now see all the wonderful things around me.

Jonah and the Whale

 Posted by on October 9, 2014  News  4 Responses »
Oct 092014
 

In RE this week we have been looking in detail about the story of Jonah and the Whale. We learned how Jonah was asked by God to go to the city, but refused and tried to escape on a boat. Goad caused a huge storm and, when they found out it was Jonah’s fault, the sailors threw Jonah overboard! A huge whale swallowed Jonah and he stayed in it’s belly for three days and nights until the whale coughed him up onto a beach. When God asked Jonah to go to the city a second time, Jonah agreed.

jonah-and-the-whale

We thought about questions such as:

– Why did Jonah disobey God?

– Why did Jonah admit the storm was his fault?

– Why did Jonah agree to go to the city in the end?

– What is the message of the story?

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Maddisons 100 word challenge

 Posted by on October 9, 2014  News  3 Responses »
Oct 092014
 

One  cold winters day Madison was playing on her computer wile her mum was washing  up. Madison was 9 years old and her mum was thirty  years old they lived on they were own. One day Madison asked if she could play out side with friends, Massey and iChat .  She said “off  course not it is too dark”.  Madison  ran up stairs and shut her door. suddenly a wizard came and said “I am gowing to cast a spell on you I am going to make you blind “. Madison   screamed   she  ran   down  stairs and went to her mum and said im blind .  her mum was a witch so then  suddenly I was able to see again. Too be continued …

Compass Challenges

 Posted by on October 7, 2014  News  6 Responses »
Oct 072014
 

Today we learnt more about following directions using the 8 compass points. Here’s a reminder:

compass

 

What different ways do you remember them?

100 Word Challenge Prompt

 Posted by on October 5, 2014  News  No Responses »
Oct 052014
 

Hello Year 4!

Here is this week’s prompt for the 100 Word Challenge. It is a special one this week, as it is linked with a charity called Sight Savers, which helps people who have cataracts. Cataracts form over your eyes and cause cloudiness; they are the number one cause for blindness in the world. Think about how your life would be affected if you couldn’t see; think about all the things you would find hard to do, or wouldn’t be able to do at all.

The prompt is:              …suddenly I was able to see again…      This must be included in your writing.

Think about how you would feel if this was you! Remember how important it is to read back through your work to check punctuation, spellings and that your sentences make sense.

I am looking forward to reading your challenges! 🙂

Miss Speake

 

The best birthday ever!!!

 Posted by on October 2, 2014  News  6 Responses »
Oct 022014
 

One scorching hot day I was in bed and I was thinking about what a beautiful birthday I would have on such a nice warm day, so I decided to quickly get out of bed and run down the stairs to great my wonderful family. I then discovered that my family was not there, so I then decided to go back up the stairs and look into my mum and dads bedroom and there I saw my dreadful sister Olivia sleeping in my mum and dads warm comfy bed. Then I walked into my sisters bedroom and there I saw my beloved mum and dad laying in my sisters hard un-comfy bed, so I whispered to myself  “what happened around here?” so I then decided to go and wake them all up, and how did I  do that exactly? I yelled “wake up guys it’s my birthday” and then they all jumped of bed as quick as a fox. Just then they all went down the stairs with me, the room was all plain before, but now it looks magical with all the presents stacked and the banners hung. After that I managed to open one of my presents and it was a door, but not just an ordinary door, a magical door. Also it was from a monkey then I wanted to go through it to see who it was from as it sounded mysterious, so whilst my mum, dad and sister all turned around I twisted the door knob and whisked my way through into a mythical world. When I got there I saw allsorts I saw dragons and fairies and I saw unicorns and Pegasus. I also saw a large sea monster working its way through the water. I could smell a candy house with lollipops as trees and sugar paper as grass and their they lived a sweet scrumptious ginger-bread-man, but yet he looked so cute. So I went over to have a better look and to see how friendly they all were, but they never saw a real life human before so they ran into their houses and started to scream and yell for help I tried my best to help them but the closer I got the louder they screamed and them a toy police car with toy police men inside it came to try and arrest me but their handcuffs were far to small, so therefore they couldn’t catch me so then I ran and ran and ran all the way to the door that I came from. I can now clearly say that I have had the best birthday ever.

THE END

samuel’s 100 word challange

 Posted by on October 2, 2014  News  5 Responses »
Oct 022014
 

One sunny day I was at home and the weeping angels came to invade. I can’t blink because if you blink they move. So I ran away. I found an old haunted house. So I went inside. As I looked around there were the daleks ,cyber men, weeping angels, sanitarian’s, smithereens, sxyorax everything. I was worried in case they caught me. It was the alien invasion! Some how they died. I couldn’t believe it. It all ended. All of it. It wasn’t even real. I went home, and I was huffing and puffing from all that running. I had a cup of tea.

jacks 100 word chalenge

 Posted by on October 1, 2014  News  8 Responses »
Oct 012014
 

0ne day playing in the colossal park with my best friends Aiden, Alfie ,Sayed and Nicholas. strait after the park we tip-toad down the creepy diminutive valley. Suddenly I notest  an inormas castle. cautiously I walked down the swirly dark path. so I trembled into the pich black door I ran into the kitchen there was a old fation black and wite floor. And scelingntons hanging from the red roof it was as red as blood. then I zoomed up stairs like a roket thet was creeking . I saw a creepy foot hoping and I started screaming I heard bats scweeling and then we lived happly ever after.

shannons 100 word challnge

 Posted by on October 1, 2014  News  6 Responses »
Oct 012014
 

As I  looked  around   I  could  see   a  clossle    jungle   it   was    very   quite  there    .   I walked  down  and   I   could see a gigantic  apple   it was        very    juicy   I   jumped   over   and  I   could see  a  scaly   green   crocodile   I went   to have  a  close a look  it didn’t  move   I  was   parlized    to death    it slaped    me and   hurted    me so I told   it not   to   and   it stoped   and  said  sorry  and   we were  friends   forever  and   we     played   together   I   hugged   him.

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