Nov 142014
November November Remember Remember the use of poppies,the people who died in war remember the time before when everyone was happy for the their family members. But what they didn’t know was war and then some more including the first and second world war. Remember Remember the eleventh of November. If you’re in the UK you may have seen the poppy display near the Tower of London. You hear about the war in History and it is true. You see it all started in 1914. Remember Remember the eleventh of November. The end of this song is very clear so just remember your poppies this year.
Ruby,
Nice song. I like that you did a song instead of a story. Thumbs up!
A unique response to the prompt, well done, you have a good understanding of the topic SMS put a great deal of effort in here. Consider your use of punctuation to ensure that it’s easy for your reader to follow the rhythm.
Keep up the hard work.
Niys Raym
Rhyme is a really tricky work to spell but remember the i-e sound in nice.
Good ruby I like it it’s mollie in yr6 x
Hi Mollie, thanks for commenting on our blog 🙂
Miss Speake
nice song
That’s a good song☺
Thank you guys I enjoy writing stories,poems and songs for the hundred word challenge.