Sep 242014
I caught a glimpse in my eye. I found a door, but not an ordinary door, a very soft door, made out of clouds. It led to…”JUNGLE!” Jack and Aiden jinxed each other, that would take a while. “Just shut-up guys!” Pepper yelled, to them angrily, nearly pulling my hair out. “We are going in,” I was proud of my-self, I was brave. So we went in, we looked to the left and we looked to the right. “Ahhhhh” we all jumped, there were baleful crocodiles hidden with orange flowers. ” He creeps me out” Pepper cried. ” Behave,” I shouted, aggressively at her.
Brilliant story Amber. My favourite part is where the twins jinx each other and you put that might take a while.