Nov 142014
One day a bear called Dream Bear was sending brilliant dreams to everyone. When she gave it to Wonderheart Bear she had a really exciting dream. Because she didn’t have a belly badge she had a dream that a purple badger was stuck in a hole and Wonderheart Bear ran speedily and sent her belly badge to the badger and took it out. Her belly badge was a sparkley red love heart.But then the Plain Bow came and attacked their dreams to make them awful dreams. However then all of the bears sang a song and their dreams became better.
i like your story because i like bears
Very good Haadiya that was like the BFG
Do you know when I said it was like the BFG I meant when the BFG was shooting out and giving dreams to the children
Good imagination
brilliant story hadiya and I like the adjectives jack
haadia I like that you have intrdust the charicters and the setting first like a real story
Thank you Georgia