Oct 132014
The mad hatter is from Alice and wonderland, his character is weired and he looks like he is going to a fancy dress party to the queen of hearts house .his clothes look rich with all his jewels ,lace and silk on his hat . also his hat is very big and he dresses not normal his hair is orange and glows like a fire also big and wild face is as white as a ghost he has eye shadow on which is very scarey and his hand bag is multi coloured i think he has a rabbit called peter and he is magic the mad hatter also had a tea party
Well done Ella this is a really detailed description. However, you now need to go back and add in the correct punctuation. Lots of your sentences are missing capital letters and full stops.
Miss Speake
I like it
well done good description xxxxxxxxx
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