Sep 242014
One day Haadiya, Amber, Monica and Anya went on an aeroplane to go to a jungle very far away. When the four children arrived at the jungle right in front of them they saw a very huge pond with a orange crocodile in it. All off the children touched the crocodile and it was very soft. So in a very shy voice Pepper the crocodile said ” Do you want to be my friend”. ”Yes we will”, said Haadiya. So from that day on they went to loads of events and forgot there trophies. Will they ever remember there trophies again?
Well done for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge Haadiya. I like how you have managed to link the unusual group of words you had and write a story that makes sense. I like the way you used speech to make Pepper seem real. I thought the children were very brave to touch Pepper. Keep writing Haadiya.