Oct 212014
 

One Halloween night a boy called Joe was out trick or treating, and he went into a forest. The boy could hear owls hooting in the colossal trees. He could feel the razor sharp branches on the trees stabbing him in the arms. Then he could taste a disgusting taste like mouldy cheese. The boy saw a tall dark baleful figure standing in front of him. Also he could smell the disgusting smell of the tall black baleful statue. He discovered that it did have a pitch black cloak on. It was stood there like a statue, it was freaky.

  One Response to “Halloween night – Alfies 100 word challenge”

  1. Hi Alfie – thanks for the story and I liked the descriptive language you have used – razor sharp branches.
    I wonder if you could have a different sentence starter?
    I really like ‘tall black baleful statue’ – what a wonderful phrase!
    Keep up your writing!
    John C
    Australia

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