Sep 242014
One spooky night in a DARK HOUSE a pepper and a orange was floating around like a soft crocodile, but I forgot my torch. Then I heard some foot steps behind me. I heard some hissing oh my goodness! It’s a vampire! Man he was pale white with razor sharp teeth what’s that behind him? it’s a zombie dog and a skeleton cat ew! Then he called 500000 zombies and 100000000 skeletons then he jumped on me and pind me to the ground and tried to bite me and he did. 1 hour later I was a vampire and I stad in my house … to be continued.
Well Logan, I never anticipated a horror story from those five word prompts. Impressive imagination! Not quite sure though, how a pepper and orange are like a soft crocodile? Your story then really picks up the pace, introducing an army of scary creatures. Glad I’m not reading this nearer to my bedtime! I wonder what on earth happened next?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
thanks
Thank you for the great feedback 🙂 I am sure it will inspire Logan to keep writing similar stories, even though some of them can be really scary!
that is exlaint
Do you mean excellent, Maddison?
Thanks everyone
Well done Logan can’t wait to read more of your stories xxxx love Tracie