Sep 242014
One summers day in the amazon a tiny litte crocodile called pepper found a sweet orange and got it down from the tree.Pepper was about to eat her jucie orange but she forgot about her eggs. Wen she got back THE EGGS WERE GONE… pepper said “were is my mango gone i am so hungrey. Then she saw the ani male who got the orange. Pepper ran so fast she naley got him.suddnly she got the man then… she found it was her dad .pepper said to him “wat are you doing here “.She went back to check her eggs.
you have spelt a few things wrong maddison
ok I will look at them jenna thank you