Oct 212014
One hot scorching day a little girl called Sophie was getting dressed for Halloween she was going to be a scary witch with a massive broom stick . The witch had a big mask with a pointy nose and a giant witches hat . Sophie was ready to go she was so excited . Suddenly there stood a massive man wearing a black cloak she could not even see his face . After Sophie thought what was going on she thought it was very spooky . Also the man was stood right next to a tree she was really scared .
Hi Monica,
Thank you for your efforts with your 100WC this week. I can tell that you’re looking forward to Halloween. Are you getting dressed up as a witch as well as your character? I wonder where the mysterious character came from. Keep working hard on your 100WC writing.
Mrs McG (Team 100WC)
Derbyshire, England
Hi Monica,
Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge. You’ve written some clear descriptions with some well chosen adjectives which help me imagine the witch.
Well done!
Mrs Stones – Bradford, U.K.
I liked that you linked it to Halloween .
I liked that you used a adjective In the title.
I liked that you used the word giant.
W: include more adjectives
Thank you I will try to make it even better next time.