Sep 302014
Today is November, the 5th and that’s bonfire night COOL. Now where in my car but just as I looked around…we were already pulling up in my granddad Stillings drive “look at those beautiful flowers” I mumbled while I was walking in we had pork pie with mushy peas Yum. BOOM the fireworks flew up in the midnight sky there were pink, blue, orange, green, red, yellow, purple, white/silver, navy blue, gold, maroon, balky brown, lilac, turquoise and any other colours you could think of.
Jenna this is a very nice coler 🙂
I like the colours you chose.
You do need to remember full stops so that your writing makes sense. It sounded as if you were walking into the house eating pork pies. However you have used some lovely descriptions and so many colours!
Makes me feel ready for bonfire night already, Jenna. All those colours! And the food, too. Don’t forget to use full stops, so your reader can breathe!
Ok,I will next time when I do the 100 word challenge again