Jan 132015
As he started, they went down a slide and it was called the death slide. When they came out of the death slide they were in death ocean. Suddenly a colossal shark came it was called BEAST SHARK! Quickly Grover said, “Look out!” Aggressively Annabeth shouted, “Go away beast shark!” Just then something peculiar happened, a bow an arrow was sticking through beast sharks head he was dead but just ten standing there was Clarisse. “Thank you so much Clarisse.” said Percy. Then in the ocean the beast got up. Finally he went to kill all his victims.
i like your use of capital letters and full stops and adjectives peculiar and i like that word because something is obout to happend