Sep 242014
One day there was a crocodile and a orange that was fighting but they forgot there weapons. Lots of people were there like there best friend pepper.
Orange was soft he can not hurt him but then crocodile punched him but then they both said to each other why our we fighting?Because we do not like each other I know said orange we cannot fight over pepper . pepper said I will not be non of your friends if you ore fighting over me ill just find some other friends because am not going to be non being friends with a pair of babies.
the end.
Hello Taylor,
Well done for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenges.It was a strange collection of words this week and you have done a superb job fitting them all in. You have written an interesting story and what a good idea to have one of the words a name!
Before posting your work always read through your writing. There are a few punctuation errors which can make your work tricky to read.
Keep up the great work.
It sounds like Pepper was very sensible. It is always a bad idea to fight over friends. Well done for taking those random words and managing to make them into a sensible story.
you could explain wat peppers like.