Oct 012014
… As i looked arownd …i notest a palese sprklys in a pink candy world.They were gummy bares that was garding the palese and the princess.
when i wanted to go in the gummy bares said all together WHAT IS YOUR NAME!!!!!!!! my name is Amy we like that name you can go in.
So i went in she said do you want a cup of tea no i need to be going.
I like the idea of your story Taylor! You missed some capital letters. Can you see where?
Miss Speake
yes
where?
This is a very magical 100 word challenge, Taylor! I love all the adjectives you use to describe things throughout the story! Don’t forget that the animal is spelled “bear”. Keep up the great writing!
thank you I will keep up the righting 🙂
not righting, writing!
good story