Oct 212014
One stormy night when the wolves were howling and the misty fog covering the giant moon, I said politely to my mum ”please can I go to the woods?” She replied ”yes”. So I quickly ran to the woods I said to my self ”these woods are very creepy”. Suddenly a pitch black terrifying statue appeared! I only just noticed that it looked like that scary grim reaper of a horror film what I watched. So I dashed out of the woods, sprinted home and slammed the door and hid under my bed. I was safe from the grim reaper.
Hi Jack,
What a wonderful piece of writing! You have a wonderful imagination and also very good punctuation. I also really like that you are so polite when talking to your mum! Keep up taking part in the 100 Word Challenge, I look forward to reading more!
Best wishes and thank you,
Niamh Team 100 Ireland
very good Jack very good wow words and phrases.