Sep 302014
But as I looked around the school everyone was completely gone! I walked to the hall, but the mass was not on. I was bewildered. It was then I remembered they are in church.”I’m missing it!” I yelled! But as I yelled I smashed the trophy and my cheeks turned red and I screeched. Then I heard laughter coming from outside. They were coming back!!! I hid under one of the tables in Y5s classroom (even though I am in Y2) Bang!… The Y5 door slammed open and the teacher saw my feet and sent me home.
RUBY I appsolutly love your story I especially like it when it said But as I yelled I smashed the tophy and my cheeks turned red and I screeched. I REALLY LOVE THIS RUBY :):):)
Hi Ruby
Loved your story, some lovely descriptions. I would have liked to have see the teachers face when she found your feet sticking out. keep up the good work.
Sue Huntley (100WC)
I’ll carry on writing stories for the 100WC because I love writing them.