the kidnapper

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The awful emperor would always slaughter people for food. He would always go in a black van and ask them “do you want some sweeties” but they are really poison inside the sugary rock . One child thought the sweets made him excited. He jumped in the van and suddenly he had a heart attack . Now his mum is looking everywhere for him she even told the police five times .I know cause its me. I’m gone forever. but I’m not full died I still can see my family and my mum is not going to find me because I’m dead .

  One Response to “the kidnapper”

  1. Hi Nicholas,

    Thank you for entering last week’s 100 Word Challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story.

    Your poor mum! I feel for her still looking for her son.

    I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.

    Happy Hallowe’en

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC

    Cork, Ireland

    Come and visit our Class Blog at http://kidblog.org/MrsBoycesClass-4

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