Oct 212014
The awful emperor would always slaughter people for food. He would always go in a black van and ask them “do you want some sweeties” but they are really poison inside the sugary rock . One child thought the sweets made him excited. He jumped in the van and suddenly he had a heart attack . Now his mum is looking everywhere for him she even told the police five times .I know cause its me. I’m gone forever. but I’m not full died I still can see my family and my mum is not going to find me because I’m dead .
Hi Nicholas,
Thank you for entering last week’s 100 Word Challenge.
I enjoyed reading your story.
Your poor mum! I feel for her still looking for her son.
I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.
Happy Hallowe’en
Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
Cork, Ireland
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