Oct 152014
The Queen of Hearts has a pale white face also her hair is red as a cherry.She has diminutive like a button eyes.Her small lips look like a love heart sitting on a bench covered with snow.The Queen of Hearts eye shadow is turquoise and it is also is extremely tall because it goes up to her eyebrows.Her beautiful, long, velvet gown is covered by love hearts and dimonds.Also the top of the dress is pich-black like a witches cloak.I think The Queen of Hearts is thinking about all of the love hearts in the world and she is desperate to say her famous word wich is OFF WITH THE HEADS.
good work jack try to put full stop (:
Haadiya this is a beautiful piece of writing,I like that you have put alot of similes and they are very hard to do.