Apr 202015
There are two statues that were magic. They could speak like an ordinary human. One day a little girl walked past the statues. She was curious because she heard someone talking when she was on her own. She started to explore the place she was in and, BANG! One of the talking statues fell on the floor and hurt its metal. The little girl called Emily took him to her house and fixed him, and after a while the statue said”thank you so, so much for fixing me”.After that Emily said bye to the statue and went back home.
Well done, good use of speech and punctuation. You could have improved this by making the first few sentences link using connectives, as they are a little short by themselves. Good effort!
Miss Speake