the woods

 Posted by on October 21, 2014  News  Add comments
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One night I was  going  to the  woods .  They was colossal  trees and baleful  sounds. Suddenly they  was a loud  CRACK . It came from the other  side  of the wood. They was a sign  saying      ENTER  IF  YOU DARE. I  thought  why  I couldn’t   go  in . But  suddenly  they was another crack  and  some body  shot out of the trees  like a rocket. So I went to see  then I  saw a pitch black  woman with a long cloak so I set the sticks on  fire  but  not on  purpose. She  fell to the ground  and was  never seen again.

  One Response to “the woods”

  1. I liked that you used CL and FS
    I liked that you used adjectives.
    I liked that you used connectives.
    W:that you used a better opener.

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